Ebenezer Titus

First off, major kudos for the creativity here! Using a real mini-fan for the propellers? Brilliant touch! You’ve got some great ideas at play, and the effort really shows. That said, the design’s intent isn’t immediately clear—a little more visual storytelling could take this from “Hmm?” to “OH, I GET IT—THAT’S AWESOME!” Maybe push the key features so they pop more? Also, the textures are a bit noisy right now. Rust works best when it feels organic—starting at the edges and fading inward (like nature’s slow paintbrush). A few subtle gradients could make it feel way more realistic! You’re on the right track—this just needs a bit more clarity and finesse. Can’t wait to see the next pass! Keep pushing—you’ve got something special here.